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“I really envy future students who will all use electronic books,”very frequently my desk mate says this to me, “ They can get rid of the pedestrian paper books while I must face them every single day. It is unfair! ”“Well,” I give the same answer to her every time, “Cheer up, there is a great chance that they might still stick to printed books like you and me.” Though many have assumed, like my desk mate, students will all use electronic books in the future, I believe that they will still use paper books.
这个情景是编的,很明显是不,但是还是很新的开头不是莫,要点也点到了嘛~~仔细观察一下,你会发现这两个开头其实是一个模版...但是对话的内容要编有意思一点,至少要像个对话的样子!就是有细节有口语词有情感有背景啦...
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对话式开头是不是很好套吶~只要创造个situation就可以了,多写几个后就熟熟地掌握了!
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我对自己的要求是“fancy and novel”。国际形势科技发展什么的已经泛滥成灾老生常谈了,要达到“STAND OUT”的地步,开头一定要新。当然,这不是说让你考试的时候苦思一个不一样的开头, 平时要有各种花样开头,慢慢的就有一种与众不同的模版了。
A good beginning is half the battle,soldiers!
Movies and TV programs made in your own country are more interesting comparing to movies and programs made in other countries.
作者简介:Prejudice是一对双胞胎,她们还只是高中生,但一战托福就以115分的高分顺利分手!两位高分考神强烈推荐大家以一种全新的开头,征服托福考官,为你的的写作满分保驾护航~ 究竟,这全新的开头是什么呢?让我们来一起看看吧!
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sports teaches us lessons about life.【2015-06-14CN 独立写作】
I have just watched the latest Disney movie Frozen, and I laughed my head off at the little snowman, Olaf,when he says it out excitedly how he wants to feel the heat in summer and get gorgeously tanned. Then I said to my twin sister who watched it together with me: “That is awesome. Why cannot our country make something brilliant like that?” Though Chinese film makers will explode at my comments, it is by all means the truth: movies and TV programs made in China are way beyond those made from America.
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这个版本的开头就是 “对话式”啦,很多文章都可以对话式开头的。看这个:
对话式开头即用对话引出主题。举个例子:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years from now, students will not use printed books any more.
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